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Good work can sometimes get lower grades than you expect. One reason could be errors in your use of English. These may be hard for you to spot, but as a professional writer I can identify and correct them.

You will benefit from my experience as a journalist, lecturer and copywriter in the fields of science, engineering, medicine, architecture, social sciences, financial services and the arts.  I won’t change the meaning of your work, but simply make it clearer by proof-reading which covers the following aspects :

I specialise in the work of Chinese students with the help of Fangying Luo who is bi-lingual in Mandarin and English and has an MA from Durham University.

This extract from a Management Studies dissertation is an example of the kind of changes I can make.

The original paragraph

US Stores Inc is a competitive grocery store in the US. We held up our earnings fairy well even under the recession, but our share price and price to earnings ratio are going down. Our investors criticized us to be complacent, because our profits relied too much on the current business we have without making any creative business progress. Investors’ opinion is reasonable, and it’s time for us to expand our shops to Europe instead of making barely increase in the North American. We consider UK market as our first step to march to the Europe market, and based on the well recognized principle ’Glocalization’, we are willing to take over a major UK local retailer. We chose three retailers to be the candidates for acquisition: Morrison, Sainsbury and Marks&Spencer. Apart from giant Tesco, these three candidates are at the similar size and share the competing percentage of market.

The same paragraph with our suggested changes

US Stores Inc is a competitive grocery store chain in the US. We held up our earnings fairy well even under during the recession, but our share price and price-to-earnings ratio are going down. Our investors have criticized us to be for being complacent, because our profits relied too much on the current business we have without making any creative business progress. Investors’ Their opinion is reasonable, and it’s time for us to expand our shops to into Europe instead of making barely any increase in the North American market. We consider the UK market as to be our first step to march into the Europe market. and Based on the well-recognized principle ’Glocalization’, we are willing to take over a major UK local retailer. We chose three retailers to be the candidates for acquisition: Morrisons, Sainsbury’s and Marks&Spencer. Apart from the giant Tesco, these three candidates are at the similar in size and share the major percentage of the market.

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David Williams, BA (social sciences), MA (Distinction) in Creative Writing

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